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FRAGMENTS
i fabricate you through a jumble of vowels and consonants,
arrange the broken shards of you in rhyme and meter.
i think of every curve and dip of your body like the careful rhythm of poetry,
if i put these lines together, they'll make sense to me.
then maybe i'll understand you.
i paint your picture in my head
with adjectives and verbs.
string together metaphors and similes
to create a personification of a girl.
i try to construct a novel out of you,
or maybe even a short story.
i build you up with prepositions and conjunctions,
tear you apart in consonants and syllables,
re-write you over again in my mind.
but there's a twist in the plot,
and i can't seem to foreshadow
the cliffhanger you're becoming.
so for now,
i'll think of you in mismatched words,
in dangling modifiers,
in fragments.
i fabricate you through a jumble of vowels and consonants,
arrange the broken shards of you in rhyme and meter.
i think of every curve and dip of your body like the careful rhythm of poetry,
if i put these lines together, they'll make sense to me.
then maybe i'll understand you.
i paint your picture in my head
with adjectives and verbs.
string together metaphors and similes
to create a personification of a girl.
i try to construct a novel out of you,
or maybe even a short story.
i build you up with prepositions and conjunctions,
tear you apart in consonants and syllables,
re-write you over again in my mind.
but there's a twist in the plot,
and i can't seem to foreshadow
the cliffhanger you're becoming.
so for now,
i'll think of you in mismatched words,
in dangling modifiers,
in fragments.
Fragments
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"i build you up with prepositions and conjunctions,
tear you apart in consonants and syllables,
re-write you over again in my mind."
I absolutely adore this section. Its flows well, something just sounds right.
tear you apart in consonants and syllables,
re-write you over again in my mind."
I absolutely adore this section. Its flows well, something just sounds right.